Burgers

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Your new task is to explain what you can see in this comic strip.

You are asked for a descriptive-narrative text, so you should describe the place and the situation, and narrate what is happening there. Furthermore, if you are able to explain the joke, better than good!

[Proceed as usual: ≥50 words; deadline: Friday, the 23rd; ah, and take part in the survey!]

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72 comentarios en “Burgers”

  1. I think what this comic is very right, because the junk food is bad for the health, the junk food can be the food more fast but is very bad, eat food healthy is good, the billboard says what to eat hamburger is bad because that have more calories, and this es bad.

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    1. I think that this comic is very right, because the junk food is bad for your health. the Junk food can be the fastest food more fast but it is very bad. Eating healthy food healthy is good. The billboard says that to eating hamburgers is bad because they have many calories, and this is bad.

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      OMG!!!
      You drop subjects, put adjectives after nouns, misuse the articles and relatives, ignore punctuation marks… 😡
      Apart from that, you are NOT asked for your opinion, but for a DESCRIPTION.
      You should correct it and rewrite it from the beginning.

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  2. A man is in a burguer and he’s going to eat a hamburguer, suddenly he saw a poster. In the poster was written that the hamburguers make your belly round. He thinks that if the burgers that are round make your belly round, the waffles that are square that are square will make you put your belly with squares although they are also junk food.

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    1. A man is in a burger and he’s going to eat a hamburger. Suddenly, he sees a poster. In the poster, it is written that the hamburgers make your belly round. He thinks that if the burgers, which are round, make your belly round, the waffles, which are square, that are square will make you put your belly with squares, although they are also junk food.

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      Be aware of verbal tense concordance.
      Never use “the” with plural nouns to speak in general.
      Never drop the subject, even if it is “it”…

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  3. We can observe a man sitting in a fast food restaurant. On the street you can see an advertisement for a gym that warns that eating hamburgers makes you fat. When the man saw it he left the hamburger and ate a waffle.
    This remaindme the tipical said of we are what we eat

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    1. We can observe a man sitting in a fast food restaurant. On the street, you can see an advertisement for a gym that warns that eating hamburgers makes you fat. When the man sees it, he leaves the hamburger and eats a waffle.
      This reminds me of the typical saying of: “we are what we eat“.

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      Tense concordance (you can’t change from present to past at your please).
      You should review before posting.

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  4. The boy is eat a Burger in a hamburger, but he’s see a sign that the window that explains that the burgers is very unhealthy, he doesn’t eat the burger but he asks for a waffle.
    The joke is that he think that the burger makes him fat the waffle doesn’t make him fat.

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    1. A boy is about to eat a hamburger in a burger, but thru the window he’s sees a sign that explains that the burgers are very unhealthy, so he doesn’t eat the burger but he asks for a waffle.
      The joke is that he thinks that the burger makes him fat but the waffle doesn’t make him fat.

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      Very poor! 😡
      Incorrect verbal tenses, third person singular, word order… You should correct your writing before posting!

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  5. Because of the hamburger’s rounded shape, he thinks that if he esta a waffle( because waffe’s shape is similar to a “chocolate’s bar”), he will have”sits Up” muscles. I supposed that he will be very surprised when the time would be passing and his belly will stay rounded.

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    1. Because of the hamburger’s rounded shape, he thinks that if he eats a waffle (because waffle’s shape is similar to a “chocolate’s bar”) he will have ”six-pack” muscles. I supposed that he will be very surprised when the time would be passes and his belly will stay rounded.

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      Rather poor 😦
      Verbals tenses, concordance… Why don’t review your writing?

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  6. In the first picture, I´m seeing a person eating a hamburger but he see an ad what does it say that the hamburgues fatten. So, he puts the hamburger away and he eats a waffle. The grace of the joke is that he keeps eating junk food ;´)

    Personally, I don´t eat junk food daily, so I sometimes I eat hamburguer, pizza, chocolate… Once a year doesn´t hurt 😉

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    1. In the first picture, I can see a person eating a hamburger but he sees an ad what does it say that says that the hamburgers make you fat fatten. So, he puts the hamburger away and he eats a waffle. The fun of the joke is that he keeps eating junk food 😉

      Personally, I don´t eat junk food daily, but I sometimes I eat hamburgers, pizza, chocolate… Just the once won’t hurt. 😉

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      Verbs of senses DON’T have continuous tenses!
      You should put more effort on reviewing and doing things right
      😦

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  7. This is hilarious. A man is about to eat a hamburguer, when suddenly he sees a billboard which says that eating hamburguers will make your belly round, so the man decides to have a waffle, thinking the typical “we are what we eat”…so he basically does that to have a “squared” belly, as a waffle.

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  8. The boy sees a sign in which he says that the hamburgers make a round belly, the boy does not want to have a round belly, he wants to have abdominals, so he eats a waffle that has the shape of squares, and so he can have his abs marked. But in reality it’s still junk food

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    1. A boy sees a sign in which he says that the hamburgers make a round belly. The boy does not want to have a round belly, he wants to have “six-pack” abdominals, so he eats a waffle that has the shape of squares, and so he can have his abs marked. But in fact, it’s still junk food.

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  9. There’s a fat boy who is going to eat a burger, but he sees in a big board an advertisement which explains that burgers make your belly round. So, he thinks that he wants to look handsome and have sculptural body. He gives up the burger and he starts to eat a waffle. This joke tells about junk food, the boy wants to have a “chocolate table”, so he eats a waffle, which is like the form he wants for his belly, but he’s eating junk food too!

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    1. There’s a fat boy who is going to eat a burger, but in a big board he sees an advertisement which explains that burgers make your belly round. So, he thinks that he wants to look handsome and have a sculptural body. He gives up the burger and he starts to eat a waffle. This joke is about junk food, the boy wants to have a belly like a “chocolate bar”, so he eats a waffle, which has the form he wants for his belly, but he’s eating junk food too!

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      A transitive verb is always followed by its object: V+O (nothing can go in the middle).

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  10. i think that this comic is right, but more people think that eating hamburgers nothing happens to them but if they eat it continuously if, but this joke means that eating other junk food does not make them fat, the best is to eat healthier and leave aside these types of meals, eating only in special moments.

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    1. I think that this comic is right, but many people think that eating hamburgers nothing happens makes nothing to them, but if they eat them continuously, if, it does. But this joke means that eating other junk food does not make them fat. [not really!] The best thing is to eat healthy and leave aside these types of meals, eating them only in special moments.

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  11. Firstly, there is a boy who is going to eat a hamburger, but at that moment he look at it and decides not to eat it. In the second picture we can see the boy looking at an advertisment of a big hamburger. Beause of the hamburger his stomach turns round. He dosen’t think he is fat. He wants to be fit and eats a gofre thinking that his stomack will be round. He think that if he eats the gofre he will have strung muscles.

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    1. Firstly, there is a boy who is going to eat a hamburger, but at that moment he looks at it and decides not to eat it. In the second picture we can see the boy looking at an advertisement of a big hamburger. Because of the hamburgers, his stomach will turn round. He doesn’t want to be fat think he is fat. He wants to be fit and eats a waffle thinking that his stomach will be round. He thinks that if he eats the waffle, he will have strong muscles.

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      You should review before posting with such a lot of silly mistakes!

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  12. The man goes to eat a hamburger, but is surprised by an ad that says: Burgers make your belly round. So, he does not want to have a round stomach, so he thinks that if a round meal makes him have a round belly, a tablet-shaped meal will make him have good abdominals, so he decides to eat a waffle to have good abdominals. What he does not know is that the waffles are as bad as hamburgers.

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    1. A boy is going to eat a hamburger, but he is surprised by an ad that says: Burgers make your belly round. So, he does not want to have a round stomach, so he thinks that if a round meal makes him have a round belly, a square-shaped meal will make him have good abdominals, so he decides to eat a waffle to have good abdominals. What he does not know is that the waffles are as bad as hamburgers.

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  13. In this picture you can see a boy in a restaurant. This boy is fat, white skin and and black hair. He is in a restaurant of junk food and he is eating burger when he sees a poster. This poster says ” if you eat burger your belly will be look round” and he wanted a square belly and for this he eats a waffle, because it has squares.

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    1. In this picture you can see a boy in a restaurant. This boy is fat and he’s got white skin and and black hair. He is in a junk food restaurant and he is eating a burger when he sees a poster. This poster says ”if you eat burgers your belly will be look round” and he wants a square belly and because of this, he eats a waffle, because it has squares.

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      Be careful with tense concordance.

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  14. There is a boy eating a hamburger in a burger`s shop. Suddenly he sees a board whis says that burgers make your belly round. When he sees it, he thinks that round hamburgers make round bellies, so he eats a gofre because he wants to have a square belly.
    I didn`t like the joke.

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    1. There is a boy eating a hamburger in a burger’s shop [!?]. Suddenly he sees a board which says that burgers make your belly round. When he sees it, he thinks that round hamburgers make round bellies, so he eats a waffle because he wants to have a square belly.
      I didn’t like the joke. [who asked for your opinion? 😛 ]

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  15. In picture one, a boy is eating a hamburger but then he stops. In picture two, he sees an advertisement that says that burgers make your belly round. In picture three, he thinks that he wants to have a square belly. In picture four, he eats a gofre to have a square belly.
    The joke means that if you eat something round, your belly will be round and if you eat something square, your belly will be square.

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  16. A young man is in a fast food restaurant. When he is going to eat a hamburger he remembers a sign that says if you eat a burger you´ll get a round belly. At that moment he decides not to eat it. He eats a waffle instead because he thinks that if he eats it, he will have a square belly.

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  17. The joke is about a boy who is in a hamburger eating a haburgesa and reads a sign in which he says that the hamburgers are fattening, since it is junk food and he would put his stomach in the shape of a hamburger. Then he decides to eat a waffle thinking that the gut would turn into a waffle shape. I liked the joke and it’s funny.

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    1. The joke is about a boy who is in a hamburger eating a hamburger and reads a sign in which he says that the hamburgers are fattening, since it is junk food, and he will put his stomach in the shape of a hamburger. Then he decides to eat a waffle, thinking that his belly will turn into a waffle shape. I liked the joke, it’s funny.

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  18. In the comic strip we can watch a boy in a burger. He is going to eat a hamburger, but suddenly he sees a poster, where they explain hamburger are a bad food for your health. In the poster suggest him to eat a goffre, and the boy chooses the gofrre. This strip shows how publicity influence us.

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    1. In the comic strip we can watch a boy in a burger. He is going to eat a hamburger, but suddenly he sees a poster, where they explain hamburgers are a bad food for your health. In the poster, they suggest him to eat a waffle, [not true] and the boy chooses the waffle. This strip shows how publicity influences us.

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  19. In the picture we can see how a man want to eat a hamburguer but he see an ad outside. The ad says that hamburguers get fat and the man set aside the hamburguer.
    But the funniest thing in this picture is when the man buy a waffle and a milkshake thinking that the food that he bought don´t get fat only because the ad don´t say that.
    I will give my conclusion: People get carried away by ads

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    1. In the picture we can see how a man wants to eat a hamburger but he sees an ad outside. The ad says that hamburgers make you fat and the man sets aside the hamburger aside.
      But the funniest thing in this picture is when the man buys a waffle and a milkshake thinking that the food that he bought doesn’t make fat only because the ad doesn’t say that.
      I will give my conclusion: People get carried away by ads.

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      Pay attention to the 3rd person singular…

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  20. a child is eating a hamburger. He looks up and see a billboard which says that hamburgers make your belly round. Then he thinks that if burgers make your belly round, a gofre will make your belly square so he decides eat a gofre. I have understood the joke but at first i have had some difficulties with it

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    1. A child is eating a hamburger. He looks out and sees a billboard which says that hamburgers make your belly round. Then he thinks that if burgers make your belly round, a waffle will make your belly square, so he decides eat a waffle.
      I have understood the joke but at first I have had some difficulties with it.

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  21. In this comic we can see a boy in a restaurant. He is going to eat a hamburger but then he sees a billboard which says that hamburgers make your belly round. The boy doesn’t want to have it so he doesn’t eat the hamburger and eats a gofre instead. The joke means that if hamburgers are round, you willl have a square belly if you eat them. It’s curious since both of them are junk food.

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    1. In this comic we can see a boy in a restaurant. He is going to eat a hamburger but then he sees a billboard which says that hamburgers make your belly round. The boy doesn’t want to have it, so he doesn’t eat the hamburger and eats a waffle instead. The joke means that if hamburgers are round waffles are square, you will have a square belly if you eat them. It’s curious since both of them are junk food.

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  22. We can see a guy thats is on a fast food restaurant. He stops eating his burguer when he see a billboard that warns of the dangers of junk food. This is sponsored by a gym.
    Next that, the boy starts to eat a waffle because he thinks that his is going to get strong and fitness.

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    1. We can see a guy thats is in a fast food restaurant. He stops eating his burger when he sees a billboard that warns of the dangers of junk food. This is sponsored by a gym.
      After that, the boy starts to eat a waffle because he thinks that he is going to get strong and fitness. [why???]

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  23. A boy is in a junk food restaurant and he sees an advertisenent about hamburgers. It says that burgers make your belly round. For that reason he decides to eat a gofre because he thinks that his belly wile be square . In my opinion, the joke nonsense because both of them make your belly round

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    1. A boy is in a junk food restaurant and he sees an advertisement about hamburgers. It says that burgers make your belly round. For that reason, he decides to eat a waffle because he thinks that his belly wile be square. In my opinion, the joke is nonsense because both of them make your belly round.

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  24. In my opinion this place looks like a restaurant of fast food. Here there is a boy who wanted to eat a hamburger but suddenly, he sees an advertisement in the street that said that if you eat hamburgers your belly will be round. Because, if the hamburgers that are round, makes the belly round, the waffle that it is square, will make the belly square.

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    1. In my opinion this place looks like a fast food restaurant. Here there is a boy who wants to eat a hamburger but, suddenly, he sees an advertisement in the street that says that if you eat hamburgers your belly will be round. So, if the hamburgers that are round, makes the belly round, the waffle that it is square, will make the belly square. [So? What is he doing? Messy, it seems incomplete 😦 ]

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  25. This guy is in a restaurant. He is goes to eat a hamburger and at that moment he sees a sign that says “burgers make your belly round. Try gym gump today”. Then, he thinks that he does not want to be fat, he wants to be fit, so he decides to eat a waffle. He thinks that the hamburger is not healthy and he prefers eat a waffle, but what he does not know is that it causes the same effect.

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    1. This guy is in a restaurant. He is going to eat a hamburger and at that moment he sees a sign that says “Burgers make your belly round. Try Gym Gump today”. Then, he thinks that he does not want to be fat, he wants to be fit, so he decides to eat a waffle. He thinks that the hamburger is not healthy and he prefers to eat a waffle, but what he does not know is that it causes the same effect.

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  26. In the previous comic vignette we can see how a boy is going to eat a hamburger, but when he sees an advertising poster against the hamburgers he decides to eat a waffle thinking that this way he’s got a six pack. I didn´t like this joke very much, it is a very simple humour,I prefer the geek humour.

    LINKS: my own perception and opinion.

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    1. In the previous comic vignette we can see how a boy is going to eat a hamburger, but when he sees an advertising poster against the hamburgers he decides to eat a waffle thinking that this way he will get a “six pack”. I didn’t like this joke very much, it is a very simple humour. I prefer the geek humour.

      LINKS: my own perception and opinion. [you weren’t asked for any links…]

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  27. In the comic, we can see a man that is going to eat a hamburger and sees in the billboard, a slogan that says: “burgers makes your belly round”.
    The man, finally doesn´t eat the hamburger and order a waffle thinking that the waffle will put his belly with six-pack.
    This is hilarious because the man is very ingenuous thinking that a waffle is better than a hamburger only for his form

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    1. In the comic, we can see a boy that is going to eat a hamburger and sees a billboard with a slogan that says: “burgers makes your belly round”.
      Finally, the boy doesn’t eat the hamburger and order a waffle thinking that the waffle will put his belly with a “six-pack”.
      This is hilarious because the boy is very ingenuous thinking that a waffle is better than a hamburger only because of his form.

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  28. At this comic strip we can see how a boy is going to eat a hamburger at a fast-food restaurant. In secon stripe, we can see the same boy who’s seeing an advertising poster, there is said that “Burgers make your belly round”. After that he thinks that wants a toned abdomen and he comes to the conclusion that if the hamburger makes the belly round, it can be because of his shape then if he eats a waffle would make it toned as well, so he orders one.

    After understandign it, we can say that the joke is that neither the burger makes the belly round nor the waffle makes you some abas. What really gives you one shape or another one is what you eat, not the form it has.

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    1. At this comic strip we can see how a boy is going to eat a hamburger at a fast-food restaurant. In the second stripe, we can see the same boy who’s seeing an advertising poster, where it is said that “Burgers make your belly round”. After that, he thinks that he wants a toned abdomen and he comes to the conclusion that if the hamburger makes the belly round, it can be because of his shape; then if he eats a waffle it will make it square as well, so he orders one.

      After understanding it, I can say that the joke is that neither the burger makes the belly round nor the waffle makes your belly square. What really gives you one shape or another one is what you eat, not the form it has.

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  29. In this comic strip there is a boy who decides to go to a burger when he is served,he reads a poster in front of him that says that the birgers makes your belly roud and he think about it and removes burger for a waffle that will have a round belly

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    1. In this comic strip there is a boy who decides to go to a burger. [?!] When he is served, he reads a poster in front of him that says that the burgers makes your belly round and he thinks about it and changes his burger for a waffle, which will have a round belly won’t make your belly round. [?]

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      Bad! Thirds person singular, tense concordance, coherence…
      You must review all those silly mistakes and correct them before posting!

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  30. The man of the comic is going to eat a hamburguer, but suddenly he sees a billboard through the window. The billboard shows that if you eat a hamburger you will be fat. Therefore, the man, who doesn’t want to be round like the hamburger, thinks that eating a waffle will be the solution.
    This is a joke about what we eat and the supposted advantages of it. Our ridiculous imagination has more power than the reality.

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    1. The man in the comic is going to eat a hamburger, but suddenly he sees a billboard through the window. The billboard says that if you eat a hamburger you will be fat. Therefore, the man, who doesn’t want to be round like the hamburger, thinks that eating a waffle will be the solution.
      This is a joke about what we eat and the supposed advantages of it. Our ridiculous imagination has more power than the reality.

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  31. We can see a man who is about to eat a hamburger, when he sees a billboard saying that the hamburgers get fat, so the man to see this decides to eat a waffle. Thinking that “ we are what we eat ” and that’s why he decides to eat a waffle because the waffle is square. I think

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    1. We can see a man who is about to eat a hamburger when he sees a billboard saying that the hamburgers get you fat, so the man to see this decides to eat a waffle. He may think that “we are what we eat” and that’s why he decides to eat a waffle because the waffle is square. I think.

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  32. This guy is in a restaurant with his burger, about to eat it. While he takes it to his mouth, he realizes that there is a billboard a few meters away from him, on the sign there is a message in which he explains that burgers only make you grow your stomach, only fat, and not they allow you to have a good physique. Immediately, the boy, separates the burger and asks for a waffle.

    the joke is that in the billboard only says that burgers are harmful to your physical, then of course, as only bad burgers, a waffle is requested. In conclusion, the two are junk food, and both the one and the other, are worse to the physical

    PD: LIVE THE DUCKS!

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    1. This guy is in a restaurant with his burger, about to eat it. While he takes it to his mouth, he realizes that there is a billboard a few meters away from him; on the sign there is a message in which he explains that burgers only make you grow your stomach, only fat, and not they allow don’t let you have a good physique. Immediately, the boy puts the burger away and asks for a waffle.

      The joke is that on the billboard it only says that burgers are harmful to your physical, then of course, as only bad burgers, a waffle is requested. [¿¡!? nonsense] In conclusion, both are junk food, and both the one and the other, are bad for your body.

      PD: LONG LIVE THE DUCKS!

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  33. In this comic strip we see a man in a fast food restaurant. He is about to eat his hamburger, when he looks out from the window and sees a billboard with an ad on it. It basically says that eating burgers make your belly look round. The man thinks about it for a while and he finally decides not to eat the hamburger. He’ll eat a waffle instead… But, why? Well, because he thinks that if burgers – which are rounded- make your belly look rounded; therefore, waffles – which are squared – make you have six-pack abs.

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    1. In this comic strip we see a man in a fast food restaurant. He is about to eat his hamburger, when he looks out from the window and sees a billboard with an ad on it. It basically says that eating burgers makes your belly look round. The man thinks about it for a while and he finally decides not to eat the hamburger. He’ll eat a waffle instead… But, why? Well, because he thinks that if burgers –which are rounded- make your belly look rounded, therefore, waffles –which are squared– will make you have six-pack abs.

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  34. In this image we see a man eating a hamburger.
    While he was eating it he sees a sign where he says that the burgers make you fat and round. The man interprets that the gut is put like that because the hamburger is round and to have a flat and muscular belly with squares, he puts the bread square shape and with squares so that his gut is put like that.

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    1. In this image we see a man eating a hamburger.
      While he is eating it, he sees a sign which says that the burgers make you fat and round. The man interprets that the belly gets is put like that because the hamburger is round and to have a flat and muscular belly with squares, he puts the bread square shape and with squares [what do you mean???] so that his belly gets is put like that.

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      Really bad! 😡
      Done in the last minute, with no interest and without reviewing…

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  35. In this picture we can see a boy who is going to eat a hamburger, but when he sees a poster that fattens he thinks of a waffle that is squared. The child believes that with the waffle he will not have a gut and will decide to eat it. He is an innocent and foolish child.

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    1. In this picture we can see a boy who is going to eat a hamburger, but when he sees a poster that says burgers make you fat, he thinks of a waffle that is squared. The child believes that, with the waffle, he will not have a round belly and will decides to eat it. He is an innocent and foolish child.

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  36. In this picture I see a man de terminated to eat a hamburger, but before eating the hamburger, he sees a poster about junk food and the consequences. So, he leaves his burger before eating it and he eats another food that he thinks it’s healthier than the burger. I think that this comic is very good because it’s right about the effects of junk food, because it’s not healthy and the comic also encourages people to stop eating junk food in an animated way, so I like this comic!

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    1. In this picture I see a man determined to eat a hamburger, but before eating the hamburger, he sees a poster about junk food and its consequences. So, he leaves his burger before eating it and he eats another food that he thinks it’s healthier than the burger.
      I think that this comic is very good because it’s right about the effects of junk food, because it’s not healthy and the comic also encourages people to stop eating junk food in an animated way, so I like this comic!

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      You were NOT asked for your opinion, just for a description.

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